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Nobody Wants to Read Your Sh*t Again 2

Nobody Wants to Read Your Sh*t Again 2

My rewrite of Hannah's story, 'Mispers'

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May 18, 2022
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Ten Shun!

So I know that my marked-up version of Hannah’s story must have been quite confusing since I cluttered the text with my remarks.

Now I have done a complete rewrite to demonstrate how the passage might work better.

Have a look then post your remarks.

MISPERS

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